Score: 1

"Bad, needs lots of work."

submission: The Joey Butters Story

date: July 18, 2005

Graphics: Quite bad and not worked on very hard. The water in the shower looked like blinking dots and the character's faces could have been worked on a lot. Your animation was choppy and poor which also needs to be helped.
Style: I know you were trying to make a nice story for this movie, it's just that the spelling errors take away from what you're reading
Sound: I couldn't tell what the people were saying, so I guess I can't give you many points.
Overall: Not a good job. You need to spend more time and make it look less sloppy.

Score: 7

"Cool fighting action"

submission: Kung Fu Fighting!!

date: July 18, 2005

I like this because the fighting was fun to watch and it was done very well. The animation was good and I love that music. The problem is, is that you don't have the best graphics for your characters. They're just black circles really. You don't have to change that style, just build on it. Maybe add shading and such, and make the weapons look better too. I liked the effect at the end. You should add more effects in the movie to give it more style. Nice one here.

Score: 6

"Interesting little fight scene"

submission: Aivaras V.S Vytas

date: July 18, 2005

Hmm, tiny little figures duking it out on a black background. Then in the end they turn dbz and shoot energy balls at each other and one of them blows up. Here are the problems and the good things:
Good
-fighting was smooth and fun to watch
-It almost looked like there were 3D effects too
-If I was a dbz fan, I would also be very happy for the ending
Bad
-Too small. I need to enjoy the action. To do that, I need to see it better first
-Boring. Why? Because the angle of view point stays the same, and the battle is too plain for me.
-dbz ending. I would have liked a more interesting one, then just resorting to dbz. Meh, whatever floats your boat.
Oh well, 3 bad 3 good, but for the most part, I say good. :)

Score: 5

"Not bad, but could have had more work."

submission: Mario vs. Luigi (Part 1)

date: July 17, 2005

The concept of your flash is way too over done. The problem is, is that the flash isn't good enough to stand out from all the other character vs character movies out there. The fighting wasn't too bad, and was fairly interesting to watch, but you might want to add some reason why mario and luigi are fighting and impact sounds when they fight are also good too. This also needs some work in the basic presentation of the flash such as the preloader, which was poor. Fix some things, not as many as you think, and you'll be known in no time :)

Score: 5

"Good ol pacman"

submission: Arcade: Pacman!

date: July 17, 2005

Too bad it's not really good ol pacman. It seems to be just another fair game. There are no sounds, which you need to get the arcade feeling. Sometimes you would go around corners without picking up the dot there and I don't think there is any use for stopping pacman in mid movement. Work on getting sounds in and improving the graphics and this will be a much better clone.

Score: 9

"Originality is the game here."

submission: Insane Marbles

date: July 17, 2005

This must be one of the most underrated games ever. This should have a portal award. I'm dead serious. The game is intensely diffilcult around 40% sanity and up, and it's still fun to play. I like how the sun changed expressions and that the background changed and so on. It gets annoying when you lose all your points and you have to gain them back slowly. You should go back a level if you lose enough marbles, so you don't end up going into the negatives. Damn, this game is really trippy. I love this because of how hard it is and how fun it is too. That's the important part of a game. You have to be hard, but you have to be fun to play so it doesn't cross the line called frusturating. This doesn't for me!

Score: 5

"Not terrible, but you need work."

submission: Crystal sword trailer

date: July 17, 2005

The problem with this is that I have no idea what has just happened and this teaser gives me no reason to ever watch the real movie. Some of the scenes lasted too long and were dragged on forever. The movie as a whole was completely boring and dumb. I know you can draw well, but make something interesting with it k? You need to add more action and suspence and maybe a hint of what's going on or an introduction to a character. Work on it, and you'll be great one day.

Score: 8

"Sweet, sweet randomness"

submission: monster kun

date: July 17, 2005

Cool animation, and very smooth too. It was nice and random, but still had a cool style to it, and you could still understand what was going on. Or at least I could. However it seemed to stop suddenly and the movie ended. What was with that? Did you ran out of ideas or something? I hate it whenever a movie gets good and then just ends. It's happened more than once today now. Oh well, if you ever finish it, it would be great because I like this a lot.

Score: 6

"Interesting take on WW1"

submission: dog war : eastern front

date: July 17, 2005

You used dogs instead of people which was interesting, the drawings and animation was ok and the battle scene was fair too. I think that if this were made a game it could be quite cool. (Like a first person shooter) The thing that annoyed me about this is the ending. You tried to be funny but instead just come across being stupid. The DBZ thing and the dogs dancing was dumb and I think that it really ruined the movie. Maybe some people like silly stuff like that, I don't.

Score: 8

"Very cool"

submission: Super Mario Orchestral

date: July 17, 2005

I like this a lot, and I also love the music! I felt the mario sprites weren't very tight, they seemed too curvy, unless that was your intention. I thought the best part of the movie was the ending with bowser because what he did really synced to the music well, unlike the other parts of the movie. The conductor through the beginning seemed like a waste of space, because all he really did was take up space on the screen, you could have got rid of him altogether and it wouldn't make a difference. Very cool style and original too.