Score: 3

"Here's what you need to do"

submission: Mario: Killed By Chomp

date: July 17, 2005

The movement of mario was very choppy try to slow it down or up the frame rate. The transitions to and from each scene were also choppy. Again, make it smooth by increasing frame rate. The basic plot was based on one dumb ending, which isn't good. Think about an interesting plot, build on it and that makes the content of the movie better. It takes a while to become good, and lots of time to make even a simple animation. Just spend more time and you'll do fine.

Score: 8

"Having no ideas becomes an idea!"

submission: LL - Idea Quest

date: July 17, 2005

Very cool flash, and good smooth graphics too. I thought it was very creative of you to come up with the idea of having no ideas and then building on that to make a cool flash. This flash is very well made because even though it's fairly long, the file size is also quite small. I really enjoyed this and will be watching your other lock legion flash.

Score: 7

"It was ok"

submission: China Rap!

date: July 17, 2005

I thought the song was quite weird, but the lip syncing and pictures was good. The character singing the song was drawn ok, but all he really did was lip the song the entire time, i was hoping that there would be more animation for the character, but instead just a bunch of pictures pop up relating to what the song says. It's average, but with more animation it would have been much better.

Score: 7

"WTF is right"

submission: The Backside Squirrel

date: July 17, 2005

I'm guessing that since this is your first flash, you were just playing aound with what you could do. That's great, it from what I see, you can draw well and the shading was nice, but seriously, even if you are just playing around, people want to see something worth while, and not just some random stuff. You aren't a bad animator, it's just that now you have to make something interesting, as being interesting is very important.

Score: 5

"What the???"

submission: Street skating

date: July 17, 2005

It's a guy skateboarding. That's it. The animation and drawing for he guy is alright, but the background is plain and there is no sound, plot, play button etc. If you want a flash to be good you need to work harder on it. Try adding some humor by making skateboarding wipeouts. Have this character ddo more things on the skateboard, and add a plot, like him being in a contest or something. By the way, what is with all the flashing? That really pisses me and I'm sure a lot of other people off.

Score: 6

"Just plain weird."

submission: Stop the Pain, it aches.

date: July 17, 2005

What it seems that you did was have a good animation a skeleton twist around and twist it's head and loop it, put music to it and write, stop the pain my body aches. I didn't see how the skeleton related to the song, so therefore couldn't find any hidden meaning if there was one. If there isn't, this is basicly not a bad skeleton with an ok song in the background. Would have been more interesting if you made the skeleton sing the words and maybe add a background.

Score: 7

"Cute, but cuts off"

submission: Keddi - Part II

date: July 17, 2005

I started watching and this is very good! The fbf is excellent and the characters are funny but also cool. I liked the fat cat and that his shirt didn't fit, but then all of a sudden the movie ends! I was hoping for more, I was into it! Maybe you could make a whole big thing out of the coat not fitting, going to the store and so on. oh well, I felt bad because it seemed soo short. How come there's no replay button? Short but sweet for me.

Score: 4

"It not too great."

submission: QUICK_CLAY_2

date: July 17, 2005

The problem with making a flash based on one joke is that it doesn't work. The joke isn't that funny either, and the flash is short as it is. The quality of the movie was poor, and i couldn't even understand what the guy said before he was mauled. The only fairly redeming thing about this entry is the 3Dish start. Try harder I guess, the animation wasn't bad, it's just that the main content is.

Score: 5

"Cute and random"

submission: Doomed City Part 1

date: July 17, 2005

For a first flash, it's ok. The graphics weren't very good and the animation was not very smooth, but it's not like it was completely terrible either. The one gag in the flash was actualy pretty funny, but the ending came out of nowhere and made no sense. Plus, why was this flash called doomed city? I figured it would have to do something about a city being doomed but i guess I was wrong. Keep working and you'll get better, actually I know you get better after looking at your other flash work.

Score: 7

"Ironic don't you think?"

submission: Orange ted and friends

date: July 17, 2005

I see you made an attempt to make a big action scene, which you did very well, the characters were well drawn and the action was pretty good. Ahh yes, if there is no peace and love, make it by killing everyone and then it will be peaceful. The animation was good and smooth except fot the walking which seemed a little slow and choppy. If this were a little longer and if the background was better it would be awesome.