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[Keddi - Part II]

Cute, but cuts off

I started watching and this is very good! The fbf is excellent and the characters are funny but also cool. I liked the fat cat and that his shirt didn't fit, but then all of a sudden the movie ends! I was hoping for more, I was into it! Maybe you could make a whole big thing out of the coat not fitting, going to the store and so on. oh well, I felt bad because it seemed soo short. How come there's no replay button? Short but sweet for me.

[Doomed City Part 1]

Cute and random

For a first flash, it's ok. The graphics weren't very good and the animation was not very smooth, but it's not like it was completely terrible either. The one gag in the flash was actualy pretty funny, but the ending came out of nowhere and made no sense. Plus, why was this flash called doomed city? I figured it would have to do something about a city being doomed but i guess I was wrong. Keep working and you'll get better, actually I know you get better after looking at your other flash work.

[Orange ted and friends]

Ironic don't you think?

I see you made an attempt to make a big action scene, which you did very well, the characters were well drawn and the action was pretty good. Ahh yes, if there is no peace and love, make it by killing everyone and then it will be peaceful. The animation was good and smooth except fot the walking which seemed a little slow and choppy. If this were a little longer and if the background was better it would be awesome.

[feather]

Very strange.

It started out quite peaceful and then all of a sudden a bird dies, kills a mouse and then a plane falls out of the sky too. What the heck was that all about? The shading on the trees was good but I didn't like the drawing of the plane that much. I wasn't sure of the meassage you were trying to get across in this, if any, but it wasn't that bad of a movie nonetheless. The music overlaps it's self if you replay, so you might want to fix that.

Mr-dude-2nd responds:

Yea thx for the review, but im lazy and never plan on fixing it lol. No one ever get around to this flash anyway.

[Ultra Avenger (Clay)]

Heh, silly.

You get high sound points for the "crime fighting lightning gyro disk" line which was pretty funny, even the second time. The characters were pretty plain and the animation was ok. The ending was lame when he killed the bad guy in like three seconds, but it was still pretty funny when he refuses to give back the dog, so the ending works. Good job.

[Kim's Kung Fu Fowl Up]

Woah, freaky.

That was quite strange if you don't mind me saying so, but still not too bad. The flashing lights were cool and the drawing for the main character wasn't too bad either. This seems like some kind of music video for the character. The ending was even more weird when that bull comes out of nowhere and bonks the guy on the head. Either I'm missing something, or this is just a rave movie for the kung-fu guy. What would have been cool if the kung-fu guy has a real fight with the bull rather than just going down wih one punch. But I guess that's the humor part.

[UR: Universal Rivalry]

Nice style

I like the sketchy style of the flash and the smoothness of the frame by frame. It didn't make much sense and I found it hard to follow, but I just took it in and it's still a very neat and cool flash. The characters look interesting, and this flash could be th opening to a big movie. The subtitles were a bit hard to read, maybe if you added a black line on the bottom it would be easier because white on black is easy to see. This is very cool and I like your other work too.

[BOW..demo]

Way too short

Why did this cut off so quickly? It wasn't that bad. The animation was good and I liked that you gave your stickmen faces. The names were pretty bad though. You could have added ,more than just camping "name here". It's not really that creative even if it does rhyme. Pretty basic stick fight unless you make it a bit better.

[Mus]

For a first flash, amazing at the least.

This is pretty cool actually. The mouse looked good and the background was drwan quite well.
I liked that you added many different angles into the movie because it makes it more dynamic and fun to watch. I liked the part when the mouse jumped on the marble, because it was funny. Some other ideas that you could have added would be a cat chasing the mouse and maybe have the mouse actually go through the maze. Nice job, and I hope you make more.

[the osama hunter]

HAHAHAHA!! Funny

I think you know that the graphics for this were pretty bad. But that's not what the movie is about. It's about the humor, so don't worry about me going into a big speech about bad graphics and drawings. The voice of the character was comedic gold and the dialouge was quite funny. The picture and the sound went out of sync in the middle of the movie, so it was harder to follow because of the that. I think you should have added a replay button, so we could watch this beautiful piece of art again and again.